This was originally a forum post, but put it on notepad so I could share with others.
My first love...
I was with a girl called Lily for 3 years and a few months until this August, a few of my close riding mates will have probably met her at least once. I really did think she was that person I'd spend the rest of my life with, or a good portion for that matter. Makes me well up a bit writing that, I'm a right wuss haha. I met her in year 10, at school, when I was 14. I had just started GCSE's and went to a different school to do an Engineering Diploma there 2 days a week, I was the class clown and got on pretty well with one lad (still meet
What's this life for?
What's this life for?
Every day is a fuckin' chore
I rwanna close my eyes,
And ffall asleep forever,
I wanna float in the sky,
Like a shimmering feather,
Take my hands, baby yeah,
Throw me a rope, pull me out
Cause I don't belong here,
Noo, no, no.. Scream n' shout..
Fuckin' demons holding me..
Twisting me.. Inside a nightmare,
Please come save me, you..
Get me outta this hellhole-
Be my savior, my angel,
Hold me in your arms and
Never let me go..
See the stars are shining at night,
Yeah, they're looking down upon
our sins- our righteous remains, but
All the we've been through, it
Don't matter when
Me without you- depressing by Jake01273, literature
Literature
Me without you- depressing
Me without you
I don't know why you need me around,
When you have everyone that keeps you safe and sound,
I feel like I'm not who you'd want,
I look around and everywhere I see,
Somethings putting me down,
I've loved you more than anyone,
But is that enough to keep you strong?
I feel like I deserve to be alone,
I wasn't meant to be here...
Consuming, controlling,
Every hope from all my expectations,
Being buried alive...
Run away, lets all run to the rain,
Where I really belong,
Teardrops falling from the skies,
Bloods dripping down my sides,
Pain will be my only cure..
It'll get me out of here.
Get me out alone,
The jou
Land of Fantasy
The story behind these eyes
Behind what you can see
Is a world of lies
And a land of fantasy
All that you can see
Will soon begin to grow
When you search the fantasy
You will forget all that you know
Look up, into the sky
Look up, and see what you can find
Look around, don't you be shy
Look around, and open up your mind
29/01/10 Jake Deakin
I see things...
I wake up in the morning just to think of you
Cause when I'm dreaming it doesn't feel so true
But when I'm thinking I hear your voice
I hear things and I haven't got a choice
So I take a step further into the dark
And all my senses are trying to bark
Trying to stop me going further into this hole
So I push them aside grasping at my goal
I flail helplessly looking for a path
Running in circles- to hear you laugh
I'm trying hard, to find a way
An antidote, to get you away
I look everywhere, praying for the day
Where I can hold your hand and run away
Run from all the mistakes we made
Just take my hand, I'll take y
In the end
I counted all the stars
I kissed all the flowers
I prayed all the time
I walked a thousand miles
But I never got there
I never got to see
How I wanted to feel
With you in my arms
But I'm calling your name
Baby it starts the flame
Burning deep inside
This love i cannot hide
Will you ever know
This love i tried to show
I found your heart on the floor
Turned round 'n saw some more
Then I tracked you down
But you were outta town
I counted each step
I kissed all the roses
Then I really started running
I ran a thousand miles
I ran for you
I'm still going
I'm running for you
Will I ever get there
Cause in the en
I wish...
See those birds way up high?
You may want to join and fly
Hear those birds in the sky?
I want to hear their cry
Why do I have to be the one
With problems and few to rely on?
Why do I have to try harder each time
When I fall for committing no crime?
What have I done to be this way?
When Do I rise from this slimy hole?
I try everyday but sometimes I fall
And I get into trouble for it all
If I could only hear what people say
Then perhaps there'd be less trouble today
When there's a fog outside
It reminds me how i feel inside
I'm lost in this world, all alone...
Which way do I go? Who do I phone?
There are very few pe
I just want to be with you by Jake01273, literature
Literature
I just want to be with you
I just want to be with you
I can't stop thinking of you
For in every thought you'd appear
And I can't help it but every time I think of you
I'd long for you to be near...
If something's wrong, I'll come a-running
I'll come a-running to you
For I'd give anything, I'd give anything
Just to be with you...
And If I had to say, if I had to say
That something touches me deep inside
It's you smile, your smile blew me away
Baby, if you'd just come here, I'd tell you
"I have nothing to hide"
I don't want to miss a moment,
'Cause each step I take I fall deeper
I'm falling deeper, I'm falling in love with you
I wanna keep falling, 'Caus
Anything for you...
When you start running I'll start running too
When everybody makes you feel down
And the whole world is against you
I'll try to help lift that sorrowful frown
When you start crying I'll start crying too
When everything puts you in pain
And nobody you know can help you
I'll try to cease all your pain
I can't do everything
But I'd do anything for you
I can't do anything
Except be in love with you
01/12/09 Jake Deakin
Dad
In every crack, in every hole
Hidden deep inside is a broken soul
I open the door to the shed and see
All the bikes that belong to Dad and me
Everybody thinks we're crazy, me 'n him
Ploughin' through the muddy hills keeps me slim
On a Sunday morn. my Dad rises
He says "Up for a rise?" and when I say no...
The rest of the day is dim, 'cos I got Dad low...
I really wished I did, but I didn't and now its all too late!
16/11/09 Jake Deakin
This was originally a forum post, but put it on notepad so I could share with others.
My first love...
I was with a girl called Lily for 3 years and a few months until this August, a few of my close riding mates will have probably met her at least once. I really did think she was that person I'd spend the rest of my life with, or a good portion for that matter. Makes me well up a bit writing that, I'm a right wuss haha. I met her in year 10, at school, when I was 14. I had just started GCSE's and went to a different school to do an Engineering Diploma there 2 days a week, I was the class clown and got on pretty well with one lad (still meet
What's this life for?
What's this life for?
Every day is a fuckin' chore
I rwanna close my eyes,
And ffall asleep forever,
I wanna float in the sky,
Like a shimmering feather,
Take my hands, baby yeah,
Throw me a rope, pull me out
Cause I don't belong here,
Noo, no, no.. Scream n' shout..
Fuckin' demons holding me..
Twisting me.. Inside a nightmare,
Please come save me, you..
Get me outta this hellhole-
Be my savior, my angel,
Hold me in your arms and
Never let me go..
See the stars are shining at night,
Yeah, they're looking down upon
our sins- our righteous remains, but
All the we've been through, it
Don't matter when
Me without you- depressing by Jake01273, literature
Literature
Me without you- depressing
Me without you
I don't know why you need me around,
When you have everyone that keeps you safe and sound,
I feel like I'm not who you'd want,
I look around and everywhere I see,
Somethings putting me down,
I've loved you more than anyone,
But is that enough to keep you strong?
I feel like I deserve to be alone,
I wasn't meant to be here...
Consuming, controlling,
Every hope from all my expectations,
Being buried alive...
Run away, lets all run to the rain,
Where I really belong,
Teardrops falling from the skies,
Bloods dripping down my sides,
Pain will be my only cure..
It'll get me out of here.
Get me out alone,
The jou
Land of Fantasy
The story behind these eyes
Behind what you can see
Is a world of lies
And a land of fantasy
All that you can see
Will soon begin to grow
When you search the fantasy
You will forget all that you know
Look up, into the sky
Look up, and see what you can find
Look around, don't you be shy
Look around, and open up your mind
29/01/10 Jake Deakin
I see things...
I wake up in the morning just to think of you
Cause when I'm dreaming it doesn't feel so true
But when I'm thinking I hear your voice
I hear things and I haven't got a choice
So I take a step further into the dark
And all my senses are trying to bark
Trying to stop me going further into this hole
So I push them aside grasping at my goal
I flail helplessly looking for a path
Running in circles- to hear you laugh
I'm trying hard, to find a way
An antidote, to get you away
I look everywhere, praying for the day
Where I can hold your hand and run away
Run from all the mistakes we made
Just take my hand, I'll take y
In the end
I counted all the stars
I kissed all the flowers
I prayed all the time
I walked a thousand miles
But I never got there
I never got to see
How I wanted to feel
With you in my arms
But I'm calling your name
Baby it starts the flame
Burning deep inside
This love i cannot hide
Will you ever know
This love i tried to show
I found your heart on the floor
Turned round 'n saw some more
Then I tracked you down
But you were outta town
I counted each step
I kissed all the roses
Then I really started running
I ran a thousand miles
I ran for you
I'm still going
I'm running for you
Will I ever get there
Cause in the en
I wish...
See those birds way up high?
You may want to join and fly
Hear those birds in the sky?
I want to hear their cry
Why do I have to be the one
With problems and few to rely on?
Why do I have to try harder each time
When I fall for committing no crime?
What have I done to be this way?
When Do I rise from this slimy hole?
I try everyday but sometimes I fall
And I get into trouble for it all
If I could only hear what people say
Then perhaps there'd be less trouble today
When there's a fog outside
It reminds me how i feel inside
I'm lost in this world, all alone...
Which way do I go? Who do I phone?
There are very few pe
I just want to be with you by Jake01273, literature
Literature
I just want to be with you
I just want to be with you
I can't stop thinking of you
For in every thought you'd appear
And I can't help it but every time I think of you
I'd long for you to be near...
If something's wrong, I'll come a-running
I'll come a-running to you
For I'd give anything, I'd give anything
Just to be with you...
And If I had to say, if I had to say
That something touches me deep inside
It's you smile, your smile blew me away
Baby, if you'd just come here, I'd tell you
"I have nothing to hide"
I don't want to miss a moment,
'Cause each step I take I fall deeper
I'm falling deeper, I'm falling in love with you
I wanna keep falling, 'Caus
Anything for you...
When you start running I'll start running too
When everybody makes you feel down
And the whole world is against you
I'll try to help lift that sorrowful frown
When you start crying I'll start crying too
When everything puts you in pain
And nobody you know can help you
I'll try to cease all your pain
I can't do everything
But I'd do anything for you
I can't do anything
Except be in love with you
01/12/09 Jake Deakin
Dad
In every crack, in every hole
Hidden deep inside is a broken soul
I open the door to the shed and see
All the bikes that belong to Dad and me
Everybody thinks we're crazy, me 'n him
Ploughin' through the muddy hills keeps me slim
On a Sunday morn. my Dad rises
He says "Up for a rise?" and when I say no...
The rest of the day is dim, 'cos I got Dad low...
I really wished I did, but I didn't and now its all too late!
16/11/09 Jake Deakin
when lust becomes so much more by ChloroformBoy, literature
Literature
when lust becomes so much more
when we first met, we were strangers.
but there is nothing strange about us.
neither of us were expecting
some one-night fling to grow
into a magnetic candlespark,
beautiful in its cliché sorrow.
and you love my clichés,
because i mean them in
the truest way possible.
making out,
making love
(heArtisans)
we crafted something
so delicate, so lovely,
a worthy melancholy:
hanging on the hope,
wishing on airplanes,
pretending every star
is ours to hold tightly.
as tightly as we want
to embrace ourselves
in each other's grasp.
i remember listening to your heart beat
like a seashell: babump, babump bump.
you're my